A wonderful piece, captivating, and emotional.
The Figure's eyes are captivating, and draw you right in. Your proportions are well balanced.
The shading is subtle and unique.
The red hair is shocking, but not to the point of distraction, and the addition of red in the eyes is a nice touch to tie the piece together.
The figure makes my eyes move across the piece, first drawn to the hair, then down the figure, and back up to the second face then finally moving the vast emptiness of the white on the left of the page.
Good solid work, thank you for creating it.